Need to add a scene with the Ant-Queen, Mobile Avatar of the Hive-Mind of the Moonfolk, and one of her agents, possibly Inspector Yi in a steampunk spacesuit, and maybe also the Dark Stranger, discussing Nemo and Robur's inventions, and the possibility that they may soon complete the "metallic dirigibles" or Tsiolkovsky Spheres, and thus have discovered not only submersibles and aeronautics, but space flight as well. If they were to reach the Moon and discover the Selene City Gate, the "hopping" technology of Distance Annihilation, or the Time-Negating function of Gates, they could save the Bahramians and Zuhurans, or wipe them out, and also rival the Moonfolk and the Strangers themselves, and their respective monopolies on teleporting and space travel.
Try to squeeze in some mention of the Ghost Angels (Martians), the Naked Serpents (Native Venusians) and the rest of the "aliens" of the Solar System of Telluria.
This would be PAGES 6 & 7 OF THE PREVIEW.
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