PAGE TWO: SPLASH, EXT. PAPER AIRSHIP FLOTILLA OVER SOUTH SEAS
panel 1: EXT. AERIAL SHOT, FLOTILLA WITH FLAGSHIP AT CENTER
CAPTION: The South Seas, Two Weeks Before
EMPRESS NADIRA (caption [or, word balloon from FLAGSHIP]): Queens and kings, emperors and sultans.
Empress Nadira (ditto): Generals, ministers, investors, tycoons.
EN (ditto): If any of them learns our secrets, the world is ruined!
EN (ditto): And now you want me to meet with these... fools?
PAGE THREE: ACTION-ADVENTURE! VERY JOE KUBERT! (7 panels)
panel 1: INT. FLAGSHIP, BAMBOO DANCER AT BAY, SURROUNDED BY BLADES
EN (off-panel?): Frankly, I'm beginning to question your loyalty. (show back?)
EN (off-panel?): Tell me why I should spare your life.
panel 2: CLOSE-UP ON BAMBOO DANCER, IN A CIRCLE OF SWORDS
BAMBOO DANCER: Three things.
panel 3: CLOSER ON BD
Bamboo Dancer: One: I'm also working for Victor Frankenstein.
panel 4: CLOSER ON BD
BD: Two: He's making BIG monsters. That can fly. And carry a rider.
panel 5: SILHOUETTE OF EMPRESS NADIRA? BACK VIEW?
EN: And...?
panel 6: CLOSE-UP ON BAMBOO DANCER
BD: And. Three: He's looking for you.
panel 7: INT. FLAGSHIP, EMPRESS NADIRA BRANDISHES CUTLASS
EN: Then Victor Frankenstein must die! (camera swings around to reveal Nadira?)
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