Frankenstein's Monsters: Special Preview
FINAL SCRIPT for LETTERING (final.FINAL)
based on dropbox layouts
NOTE:
TIMESTAMP = CAPTION BOX W/ "HOLLOW" FONT
CHARACTER DIALOGUE IN WORD BALLOONS UNLESS OTHERWISE NOTED.
PAGE ONE
Panel 1 (superpanel above)
TIMESTAMP1: CHINA.
TIMESTAMP2: 1870.
TIMESTAMP3: VICTOR FRANKENSTEIN'S 100TH BIRTHDAY.
VICTOR FRANKENSTEIN1: A FULL CENTURY, ELIZABETH! CAN YOU BELIEVE IT?
VICTOR FRANKENSTEIN2: IF ONLY MY OLD COHORTS COULD SEE ME NOW!
Panel 2 (KIRIN)
VICTOR FRANKENSTEIN3 (OFF-PANEL1): THE WIZENED SAGE...
Panels 3 (BIXIE)
VICTOR FRANKENSTEIN4 (OFF-PANEL2): MASTER OF THE ANCIENT CRAFT...
Panel 4 (PIXIU)
VICTOR FRANKENSTEIN5 (OFF-PANEL3): KEEPER OF LOST SECRETS.
Panel 5 (superpanel below)
VICTOR FRANKENSTEIN6: OH, ELIZABETH!
VICTOR FRANKENSTEIN7: HOW DARE THEY CALL ME A FAILURE?
TIMESTAMP4: TWENTY MINUTES AGO.
PAGE TWO
Panel 1 (splash)
TIMESTAMP1: VENUS.
TIMESTAMP2: 1870.
TIMESTAMP3: THE CHEQUERED PAST, FLAGSHIP OF THE EMPRESS NADIRA.
TIMESTAMP4: THE WEEK BEFORE.
EN: I don't care how you got past my guards on Earth.
EN: Or how you could be stupid enough to use a Portal without permission.
EN: But the Moon-Queen controls the Pathways. And no-one crosses without her consent.
EN: Her wrath will be swift. Your mistake doomed my world.
PAGE THREE
Panel 1 (BD at bay)
EMPRESS NADIRA (off-panel): Speak quickly and keep your head.
BAMBOO DANCER: A man named Victor Frankenstein can bypass your Pathways.
BAMBOO DANCER: He's built a... thing that can cross without a Portal.
Panel 2 (BD closeup)
EMPRESS NADIRA (off-panel): So Frankenstein lives, eh?
Panel 3 (BD even closer)
EMPRESS NADIRA (off-panel): But why tell me?
Panel "4" (the gap between the inset panels)
BAMBOO DANCER (in gap): He built a monster to protect it. Only you can stop him.
Panel 5 (eyeball closeup)
BAMBOO DANCER (caption? thought balloon?): I knew she wanted it for herself.
Panel 6 (hilt closeup)
EMPRESS NADIRA: Then Victor Frankenstein...
EN: And his monster...
Panel 7 (pullback to Nadira reveal)
EN: Must die!
PAGE FOUR
Panel 1
TIMESTAMP1: THE MOON.
TIMESTAMP2: 1870.
TIMESTAMP3: AUDIENCE CHAMBER OF THE MOON-QUEEN.
TIMESTAMP4: YESTERDAY.
INSPECTOR YI1: HE'S STILL PERFECTING IT. HE CAN'T CONTROL IT YET.
INSPECTOR YI2: WE'RE NOT READY TO RELEASE HIM INTO YOUR CUSTODY.
MOON-QUEEN1: YOU WILL BRING US BOTH PROTOTYPES. AND DOCTOR FRANKENSTEIN.
DARK STRANGER1: SURELY THIS DISCOVERY WAS MEANT FOR MY PEOPLE!
Panel 2 (Inspector Yi)
INSPECTOR YI3: MY GOVERNMENT DOESN'T SEE IT THAT WAY.
INSPECTOR YI4: THIS WAS DISCOVERED ON OUR WORLD.
MOON-QUEEN2: THIS WILL DESTROY YOUR WORLD.
Panel 3 (Moon-Queen & Dark Stranger)
MOON-QUEEN3 (TELEPATHIC1): YOU ARE NOT THE STEWARDS OF THE PATHWAYS!
MOON-QUEEN4 (TELEPATHIC2): THIS IS FOR THE MOON-FOLK TO SAFEGUARD.
DARK STRANGER2 (TELEPATHIC3): HOW COULD YOU KEEP THIS FROM US?
PAGE FIVE
TIMESTAMP1: ASIA.
TIMESTAMP2: 1970.
TIMESTAMP3: A HUNDRED YEARS IN THE FUTURE.
TIMESTAMP4: AND NOT SO LONG AGO...
Panel 1 (upshot from inside crate)
BD1 (CAP1): FIRST TIME WE'D ALL WORKED TOGETHER.
WS1 (CAP2): PRETTY TYPICAL GIG.
Panel 2 (team working on Org, Mech, Remote)
BD2 (CAP3): STEAL IT AND STUDY IT, THEY SAID.
WS2 (CAP4): REVERSE-ENGINEER THE ARCANE ARTIFACT.
Panel 3 (the pool scene)
BD3 (CAP5): SUPPOSED TO HAVE "ENDLESS POSSIBILITIES".
WS3 (CAP6): THE USUAL "POTENTIAL FOR MISUSE".
BD4 (CAP7): BUT I HAD MY OWN IDEAS.
WS4 (CAP8): THERE WAS POTENTIAL, ALL RIGHT.
Panel 4 (Kestrel w/ Remote)
Panel 5 (the Embrace)
BD5/WS5 (CAP9): WHAT WERE WE THINKING?
Panels 6 & 7
TIMESTAMP5: CHINA.
TIMESTAMP6: 1870.
Panel 6 (WS & MECHANISM)
TIMESTAMP7: LAST MONTH.
WS6 (CAP): IT WAS... DYING?
WS7 : I THOUGHT HE COULD SAVE IT.
WS8: ANOTHER MISTAKE.
VF1: STOP WIGGLING!
Panel 7 (BD & ORGANISM)
TIMESTAMP8: THIS MONTH.
BD6: THE POOR THING.
BD7: I HAD NO IDEA HOW SICK HE WAS.
BD8: IT WAS... DISGUSTING.
VF2: JUST A LITTLE PIECE!
PAGE SIX
Panel 1 (profile w/ skullizabeth)
TIMESTAMP1: CHINA. 1870. FIFTEEN MINUTES AGO.
VF1: THEY ALL DOUBTED ME, ELIZABETH.
VF2: EVEN YOU, MY DEAR.
Panel 2 (toss)
VF3: YOU'RE DEAD TO ME NOW.
Panel 3 (gulp!)
VF4: "HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO VIC--"
PAGE SEVEN (raWr!)
THE MEGAKAIJU: "WIK-TOR!"
VF1: LIZ!?
PAGE EIGHT
Panel 1 (upshot, Sibley shouting down)
TIMESTAMP1: AT THE FRONT DOOR. TEN MINUTES AGO.
SIBLEY ODENWALD: YOU CAN'T SEE HIM!
SIBLEY ODENWALD: IT'S HIS BIRTHDAY!
SIBLEY ODENWALD: NO APPOINTMENTS!
IINSPECTOR YI: MISS SIBLEY, YOU MUST LET US IN!
Panel 2 (over her shoulder)
WESTERN SPY: LOOK, WE'RE ALL DEAD IF YOU DON'T LET US IN RIGHT NOW!
Panel 3 (leaps off balcony)
SIBLEY ODENWALD: I SAID...
Panel 5 (crouch)
SO (CAP): "NO APPOINTMENTS!"
PAGE NINE
Panel 1 (establishing shot)
TIMESTAMP1: HALF A MILE AWAY. FIVE MINUTES AGO.
ALEX: ...speak to the Master of the Villa.
ALEX: It's said that I must first speak to the Mistress of this Teahouse.
WAITER: The Mistress has declared a holiday.
WAITER: She and the Master are not to be disturbed.
Panel 2 (close on Alex over waiter's shoulder)
ALEX: Oh, he'll see me.
ALEX: We're very close.
ALEX: Practically brothers.
Panel 3
WAITER: Today is the Master's birthday! Mistress Sibley said...
WAITER: "No Appointments!"
Panel 4 (a, b & c)
ALEX: You...
ALEX; don't...
ALEX: understand...
Panel 5
ALEX: We're here for the party.
PAGE TEN
Panel 1
TIMESTAMP1: JUST OVER THAT HILL. TWO MINUTES AGO.
GL1: THEY SAY THE FLAMING KIRIN HAS RETURNED TO THE GLADES OF WULIN.
SA1: SHOULD A MAN OF LEARNING REPEAT SUCH SUPERSTITION?
GL2: ONLY DEATH BRINGS QUIET TO THE FOREST OF THE LAWLESS.
SA2: I'M NOT SURE IF YOU'RE A POET OR AN IDIOT.
PAGE ELEVEN
Panel 1
GL1: THERE IS A DIFFERENCE?
PAGE TWELVE
Panel 1 (establishing shot)
TIMESTAMP1: HERE. NOW. (near BD where she is hiding behind the clock)
AF1: YOU'VE MADE QUITE A MESS, VICTOR.
AF2: BUT I'M HERE, AS USUAL, TO CLEAN IT UP.
VF1: I'M SORRY, SHOULD I KNOW YOU?
VF2: FORMER ASSISTANT? VENGEFUL INVESTOR?
Panel 2 (Victor overconfident)
VF3: JEALOUS HUSBAND?
Panel 3 (Alex taking off big hat)
AF3: ARE YOU BLIND OR JUST SENILE?
AF4: I'M YOU, ONLY BETTER!
Panel 4 (Victor reaction shot)
VF4: MY GOD!
VF5: ALEX?
Panel 5 (Alex face reveal, Kestrel hands Remote to Alex, Bamboo Dancer in rafters
AF5: I WOULDN'T FORGET YOUR CENTENNIAL, OLD MAN!
AF6: I HEAR YOU'RE HAVING TROUBLE WITH YOUR LATEST CREATION.
Panel 6 (Alex offering Remote)
AF7: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
AF8: IS THERE CAKE?
TIMESTAMP2: FINALLY.
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